A BLUNDER
It was a cloudy day years back still I can't forget that day and date that was 31st December 2017 just one day before 2018 .
We were in Solan Himachal Pradesh at that time . My most favourite place since my birth .....that place where I have spent most of my weekends and holidays that place being my Nani's house. it is the place where I have the most beautiful memories and people whom I love and adore the most . I had gone there to spend my winter vacations at that time .And after 10-15 days we decided that before heading back to our house that is in Kurukshetra , we would go for a short trip to Giri pull .....so we all got ready my parents ,relatives and my cousins . We all were so excited that that day we would have so much fun and therefore everyone packed their bags ..... And I kept my most important things with me my cap ,chewing gums,spare t-shirt and most importantly my sunglasses yeah that's true and we all went by our car . First 10 minutes were heavenly after that my cousin who is very naughty started fighting with me I pinched him and he started crying and complained to my mom which resulted in my mom's scolding .... I got so angry and was extremely upset for some time . after about two hours we almost reached our destination it was such a beautiful place that I won't be able to express in words - tall mountains , covered with clouds and a river could be seen majestically flowing at the bottom in between the mountains. One could listen to the sound of river with a soft touch of Cold breeze ! There were hardly any people it was a calm place and we were very close to our destination where on edge of the road we saw 4-5 young guys taking pictures , pushing each other playfully . It was a very risky over top of the hill and if one would look down there was a huge gorge and one might possibly die if he/she fell from there . Everyone in car started staring towards . My mom commented ,' kids these days are so irresponsible' . I feared that one of them might even fall . After 15 minutes we parked our car on road and decided to walk down the hill to be on the shore of river .... We all were so excited especially me and my cousin ..... We were running so fast since we could see the beautiful river but who knew something very bad was going to happen .My brother shouted very loudly my dad rushed to see what had happened . Everyone panicked we all rushed there and were shocked and speechless A boy was completely drenched in blood ...... I got so scared after seeing that my mom tried to cover my eyes but I could see blood on rocks. I was not able to speak or think anything that site was extremely painful to watch ! My dad said those were the same boys who were pushing each other on the edge of road .....I saw that his friends were crying and there eyes were filled with intense terror and that person who had fallen was not even able to stand and he was unconscious ........I don't know what happened after that but my trip was ruined I couldn't stop thinking about that painful site . After 5-6 hours we returned to my Nani's house I was only thinking if that person was ok or not ! I don't know what happened after that and if that person is alive or he died ......if something would have happened to that person how would his friends be able to survive how would they be able to forget this that they had committed such a big blunder ......they won't be able to forgive themselves in their entire life . Just one mistake changed everything . Till this day even after three years have passed I just wish to know if that person is alive or has he passed away ? but unfortunately this question will remain unanswered forever !!!!
Wonderful portrayal
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